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 RIANN, Jaelyn
Jaelyn Riann
Posted: Aug 31 2007, 04:21 PM



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    ;; FULL NAME: Jaelyn Richard Riann
    ;; AGE: Sixteen
    ;; GENDER: Male
    ;; GRADE LEVEL: Junior
    ;; DAY STUDENT / BOARDER: Boarder
    ;; MAJOR & MINOR: N/A
    ;; CLIQUE: What is he? Jaelyn can be a bit of a loner, but he also hangs out with the emo styled kids. He likes his alone time because


    ;; APPERANCE: { 2+ paragraphs }
    ;; CELEBRITY: No Celebrity. He’s Mr. your_fat_bitch on vampire freaks. His name is Alex.
    ;; HEIGHT: 5’8
    ;; HAIR COLOR: Brown, cut into an emo flip. Sometimes it is dark brown with a slight amount of blond in it.
    ;; EYE COLOR: Brown
    ;; BUILD: He weighs 132lbs, but it is more muscle than fat. He works out and has a very good body.
    ;; CLOTHING STYLE: He likes tight clothes. I don’t know why, but he loves to have clothes on him that are tighter than most men like. What’s the point in wearing clothes that are WAY to big for you? Girls don’t do it. Why should guys? Exactly. He likes black, pink, red, lime green and white clothes, along with blue or black jeans and Khaki’s. But his style doesn’t only include girly like clothes. Oh no. He loves piercings, having snake bites and his ears pierced.

    ;; PERSONALITY: Jaelyn Riann. What can I say about Jaelyn Riann? He’s pretty shy. He keeps to himself most of the time, but once you know him, he can let loose He’ll talk your ear off if he knows you. Trust me, he LOVES to talk, but only to people he knows. In class, he’s quiet and reads or draws most of the time. He loves to draw. He loves to take pictures of himself. He likes his looks.

    What else is Jae? Oh, he’s outdoorsy… I know, not a word but… He loves the outdoors. I know, it’s girly, but he gardens. He’s in the gardening club. The garden at his house is his own creation. Since he likes the outdoors, he also likes animals. He’s a big softy for any type of animal. Even things like snakes and spiders. Jae would never think of killing anything. Sadly, even a mosquito.

    Jaelyn can be somewhat funny, but his jokes are saved for close friends and his family. Jae can be sweet, self centered, and even Naïve, but it doesn’t show often. He’s shy and timid. If he doesn’t know you, then you won’t see the real him.
    ;; HISTORY: On the twenty-ninth of January, A baby boy was born to Richard Jordan Riann and Lyn Jessica Riann. He was the first and only to be born and was named Jaelyn Richard Riann. Jaelyn was a combination of two things. His grandfathers middle name and his mothers first. His middle name was for his father, who claimed to love him more than life itself. It wasn’t until Jae was six, that he found out his father hadn’t loved life at all, or him for that matter.

    On February thirteenth, the year Jaelyn had turned six, Richard Riann committed Suicide. I won’t go into detail because it was a very depressing time for both Mrs. Riann and Jaelyn. After a few years, Mrs. Riann finally decided to tell Jaelyn the reason as to why his father had killed himself. See, the year before had consisted of Mr. and Mrs. Riann fighting constantly. Mrs. Riann had filed for a devoice, sending Mr. Riann into a fit or rage. Had he killed himself out of anger? This was unsure to everyone, but they knew it could have been the reason.

    So, Jae was an only child with a single mother. But it didn’t matter. He loved her very much and wouldn’t have asked for a better parent. But then he turned fourteen. His mother sent him to a boarding school. It wasn’t that he hated the school. It was a beautiful school. He just didn’t want to leave his poor mother alone. Finally, she convinced him that she would be fine without him around for a little while. With that, he kept going to the school, loving every minute of it.
    ;; ANYTHING ELSE? Nope

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    ;; NAME: Bailey
    ;; AGE: fifteen
    ;; TIME ZONE: I have no idea. Eastern Standard Time I think
    ;; FORMS OF CONTACT: YIM;; black_angel1028
    EMAIL;; hootchieroleplayer@hotmail.com
    MSN;; lilangel1028@hotmail.com
    ;; WHERE DID YOU FIND US? You posted an add on our site, All good things come to an end.
    ;; SAMPLE RP: A pair of eyes watched the thin male. Red hair fell over his eyes as he looked away from the other being. What was going on between them? They had been so close and now... well now they didn't even speak. Sometimes they would give the occational 'goodnight' to each other, but nothing more. George wouldn't even tell him what he had done to cause this problem.

    With a sigh, he looked back at his brothers disappearing figure. He missed the old times. The times when they joked, acted, and talked liked brothers. When they cared what the other one thought and weren't afraid to ask for help. When their love for each other had been true.

    Jumping slightly, Fred Weasley watched as his brother winked at him. 'what the bloody hell was that?' he thought, grabbing his suitcase and heading out the door. Was everything just supposed to be good again? Was he supposed to be the loving brother once more? Just because he was the younger of the two didn't mean that his twin could toss him away and call him back whenever he wanted to.

    Brushing his red hair behind his ear, he hurried to catch up with his brother. As he reached him, his mouth stayed shut. He wasn't going to be the first to break the silence, that was for sure. His eyes stayed on the other, his expression clearly stating that he wasn't going to take much more of this 'game'. Biting on his lip, he went to the car and placed his bag in the trunk. God, he couldn't even keep his mouth shut without feeling bad. He was going to have to sort out his priorities and soon.

    He got into the car and pulled the seatbelt over his body. He sat on the left side and his sister sat in the middle. A free seat was beside her. Secretly, he hoped his twin would sit beside the girl. He wanted to sort this out with the boy. He needed too. He felt so alone. He felt as if he wasn't wanted... Maybe he wasn't.

    With a yawn, he rested his head on the window. The cold glass sent a shiver down his sline. He could see the male. Brushing at the tears he felt form, he touched the glass.

    The entire ride to platform 9 and 3/4's, he stayed silent. He couldn;t his voice. Words just wouldn't come out. Parking, he got out of the car as quickly as he could and opened the trunk. He took his stuff out and looked at his mother. Saying goodbye, he felt the womans lips touch his cheek. Waving, he ran through the wall and smiled. The train sat infront of him and, in no time at all, he sat alone in a room. He was without his other half and it felt horrible. But, to say the least, he'd be okay... at least, he hoped he would.

    OOC// I know it’s short, but I do love this intro.


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Posted: Oct 2 2007, 04:02 PM



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First of all, I love that Jae is going to be a High School Junior. We don't have many high schoolers on here at the moment.

A few things though,

First of all, under major and minor it would be extremly helpful if you could put in what he is planning on majoring and minoring in. I don't know why this isn't in the rules, but it just makes things a lot easier for us admins. just something like "Planning on having.... Major: --- Minor: ---"

Second, Please read through the entire rules, start to finish.

Third, the clothing style and history parts need to be a tad longer. I know we say you only need to put a few paragraphs for history, but by that we mean longer paragraphs. We don't need 50 million pages about every event in Jae's life, but a bit more than what you have would be great.

And that's about it. Thanks so much for your application, and please post back here when you've edited.

Thanks a lot!

xoxo,
Admin Eilee.





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