DANZIG's Large Modified CA Dresden
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DANZIG's Large Modified CA Dresden| DANZIG |
Posted: Jun 9 2010, 09:21 PM
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Junior Member  Group: Members Posts: 119 Member No.: 846 Joined: 19-May 10  |
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| DANZIG |
Posted: Jun 10 2010, 12:34 AM
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Junior Member Group: Members Posts: 119 Member No.: 846 Joined: 19-May 10 |
updated variant! IUSED PARTS FROM ASHLYS MKLASSE3RDBATCH ON BOTH also the upper bridge is from Richelieu and Redhorse. (Posted Image)
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| Colosseum |
Posted: Jun 10 2010, 01:06 AM
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hey dudes Group: Administrators Posts: 3,684 Member No.: 1 Joined: 4-June 08 |
I see a LOT of stuff you've taken from other artists and not credited for.
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| klagldsf |
Posted: Jun 10 2010, 02:54 AM
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even Colo thinks I'm an asshole Group: Members Posts: 1,509 Member No.: 488 Joined: 16-April 09 |
I see a lot of other stuff that's just wrong. There's no way a hull of that draft is going to support guns of that size and such a ridiculously massive superstructure. Sorry.
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| DANZIG |
Posted: Jun 10 2010, 02:55 AM
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Junior Member Group: Members Posts: 119 Member No.: 846 Joined: 19-May 10 |
that's fine any suggestions?
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| klagldsf |
Posted: Jun 10 2010, 03:01 AM
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even Colo thinks I'm an asshole Group: Members Posts: 1,509 Member No.: 488 Joined: 16-April 09 |
First thing, like Colo said, is to do proper credits.
Secondly...the hull needs to have a deeper draft. Really, with what you're going for it can be a battlecruiser or battleship. Also, your secondary armament scheme is ridiculous. Ditch the 3-inch guns turrets and go with something more German-appropriate. You're also forcing a ridiculously wide beam with your secondary turrets too. Go with maybe two on each side, right along midships, like how you have your middle turret arranged now. There are also numerous style and guideline issues. |
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| Ashley |
Posted: Jun 11 2010, 06:38 AM
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member Group: Members Posts: 106 Member No.: 595 Joined: 2-September 09 |
look at
Germany Navy - for real and Z-Plan ships original plans of german warships This might help you in imaginating, how a fictional Kriegsmarine ship should looke. Please do not do dumb kitbashing. Your vessel has got far too much top weight, is hopelessly overarmed and the shown data sound like an april joke. Please, we try very hard to keep this forum serious. I believe you can do better. |
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| Portsmouth Bill |
Posted: Jun 11 2010, 08:25 AM
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Sea Dog Group: Moderators Posts: 1,949 Member No.: 315 Joined: 22-December 08 |
Yes, lets just say including a post war USN dual 3-in in the secondary armanent is indicative of a sloopy approach; and I can't even begin to consider the other numerous errors. I have to say, if you post stuff like this you will 'get shot down in flames'; maybe a little research will assist you? ;)
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