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Title: How to Save A life
Description: Her first kiss.


Ace - October 21, 2007 04:48 PM (GMT)
My first little story so tell me what you think.

How to save a Life

Chapter 1
(Not finished yet)


They lay sprawled out on the pavement. Four children lazily drifting in and out of sleep on the warm road all exhausted from their football game. The evening sun was slowly beginning to set, allowing the night breeze to cool the uncomfortable summer air. Bella, the only girl involved in the game, glanced around at the three boys. The two youngest, her brother and the kid from down the road, were starting to wake up. They were hungry and bored. The eldest boy was awake too, sitting up on his knees.

"Why don't you guys run into the house and grab some pizza?" He suggested to the boys. "I know it's arrived."

The two sprung to their feet and ran inside. They were clearly racing each other. Bella, still lying down, noticed her and Kyle were the only two on the road. They were alone. There were no cars on the road at all, since their street was only small, and everyone was in their homes, watching TV in front of their air conditioners. Kyle noticed this too. He crawled forward and lay down facing Bella.

"I beat you!" He mocked. Bella rolled her eyes.

"That's because you stuck me with my nerd brother. He can't play sport to save his life. Anyway," She said, wriggling a bit closer to Kyle. "I still think I could beat you in a spelling bee."

"Probably," Kyle agreed.

The blow flies started to buzz around them. One landed on Bella’s cheek. Kyle lifted his hand and wiped the fly away, gently. Bella felt tingles and his finger brushed her skin. He took his hand away, but Bella wished he hadn't. She felt so confused. She had never seen Kyle in this light before. They had grown up together, they were practically related. All of a sudden she felt a rush of emotions that she knew she couldn't suppress.

Kyle felt the same way, too. He knew it felt wrong since Bella was like a sister to him. He moved closer to Bella and his hand found hers. Their hands clasped. Bella felt her lips moving closer and closer to Kyle, and his moved to hers. She was scared and excited at the same time. So was he. Their lips gently touched. Bella’s heart rose into her throat. Kyle's spare hand cupped Bella’s cheek as he gently pulled her lips further into his. It was then that Bella remembered something; this was her first kiss. And it was beautiful.

Cheesecake - December 6, 2007 11:16 PM (GMT)
AW, it's so sweet!!! I really like it, you should continue!




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