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power of sadness

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VEX	Posted: Dec 25 2007, 06:17 PM
Newbie Group: Team Neptune Posts: 17 Member No.: 16 Joined: 22-December 07	sadness is a essence that consumes other lives sadness is the weapon some use to replace knives it destroys happiness and depletes liberation it can devour your soul, and kill salvation sadness can corrupt and control your mind it's a thing that lives in all mankind it is the soul of depression, and the begging of madness and that my friend, is the power of sadness this is my first try at a more negative poem -------------------- An eye for an eye huh, ill keep that in mind

K_Gen	Posted: Dec 25 2007, 06:48 PM
Administrator Group: Administrative Team Posts: 48 Member No.: 1 Joined: 4-November 06	Yea, like I said in your other poem. It's like you're coming up with one word , then pulling another one out of nowhere that rhymes with it, and making up sentences with them. Take a break and stop pushing the poetry out. -------------------- Please make sure you check the announcements daily for new going-ons here at W:A ~Founder of W:A http://betaman.deviantart.com http://double-you-ay.deviantart.com

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Posted: Dec 27 2007, 11:28 AM

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QUOTE (K_Gen @ Dec 25 2007, 11:48 PM)

Yea, like I said in your other poem. It's like you're coming up with one word , then pulling another one out of nowhere that rhymes with it, and making up sentences with them. Take a break and stop pushing the poetry out.

Damn it you said what I was going to say >.>

K_Gen	Posted: Dec 27 2007, 11:48 AM
Administrator Group: Administrative Team Posts: 48 Member No.: 1 Joined: 4-November 06	great writers think alike. -------------------- Please make sure you check the announcements daily for new going-ons here at W:A ~Founder of W:A http://betaman.deviantart.com http://double-you-ay.deviantart.com

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