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With The Lights Out > Pen Cap Chew > the scent of abortion


Posted by: needles and pins Jun 24 2008, 09:10 PM
quickly scrawled on a spontaneous breath of fresh air

I've been left with nothing, but aches and chills
at the end of drowned confusion, I can only feel
the lack of kindly manners, every night and day
countless things of ridicule, it can end this way

I have never felt so used
keep in mind that I'm in love with you
tell me secrets, if you need
I'm at fault for disbelief
You can keep me in your hands
it's so great to be here again

Posted by: D-7 Jun 25 2008, 09:43 AM
Thumbs up, although the title is slightly eh, wrong when compared to the poem. tongue.gif

Posted by: needles and pins Jun 25 2008, 04:50 PM
QUOTE (D-7 @ Jun 25 2008, 02:43 AM)
Thumbs up, although the title is slightly eh, wrong when compared to the poem. tongue.gif

yeah, I know
I didn't have a title when I posted this
so I put something random laugh.gif

Posted by: D-7 Jun 27 2008, 03:15 PM
QUOTE (needles and pins @ Jun 25 2008, 06:50 PM)
QUOTE (D-7 @ Jun 25 2008, 02:43 AM)
Thumbs up, although the title is slightly eh, wrong when compared to the poem. tongue.gif

yeah, I know
I didn't have a title when I posted this
so I put something random laugh.gif

That's the way to go.

Posted by: Incesticide89 Jul 3 2008, 03:02 PM
i really like it. the imagery that comes out is very powerful. nice raw emotions.

Posted by: needles and pins Jul 3 2008, 03:28 PM
QUOTE (Incesticide89 @ Jul 3 2008, 08:02 AM)
i really like it. the imagery that comes out is very powerful. nice raw emotions.

thanks

Posted by: Incesticide89 Jul 3 2008, 03:50 PM
QUOTE (needles and pins @ Jul 3 2008, 03:28 PM)
QUOTE (Incesticide89 @ Jul 3 2008, 08:02 AM)
i really like it. the imagery that comes out is very powerful. nice raw emotions.

thanks

your welcome laugh.gif

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