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Title: the scent of abortion


needles and pins - June 24, 2008 09:10 PM (GMT)
quickly scrawled on a spontaneous breath of fresh air

I've been left with nothing, but aches and chills
at the end of drowned confusion, I can only feel
the lack of kindly manners, every night and day
countless things of ridicule, it can end this way

I have never felt so used
keep in mind that I'm in love with you
tell me secrets, if you need
I'm at fault for disbelief
You can keep me in your hands
it's so great to be here again

D-7 - June 25, 2008 09:43 AM (GMT)
Thumbs up, although the title is slightly eh, wrong when compared to the poem. :P

needles and pins - June 25, 2008 04:50 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (D-7 @ Jun 25 2008, 02:43 AM)
Thumbs up, although the title is slightly eh, wrong when compared to the poem. :P

yeah, I know
I didn't have a title when I posted this
so I put something random :lol:

D-7 - June 27, 2008 03:15 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (needles and pins @ Jun 25 2008, 06:50 PM)
QUOTE (D-7 @ Jun 25 2008, 02:43 AM)
Thumbs up, although the title is slightly eh, wrong when compared to the poem. :P

yeah, I know
I didn't have a title when I posted this
so I put something random :lol:

That's the way to go.

Incesticide89 - July 3, 2008 03:02 PM (GMT)
i really like it. the imagery that comes out is very powerful. nice raw emotions.

needles and pins - July 3, 2008 03:28 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Incesticide89 @ Jul 3 2008, 08:02 AM)
i really like it. the imagery that comes out is very powerful. nice raw emotions.

thanks

Incesticide89 - July 3, 2008 03:50 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (needles and pins @ Jul 3 2008, 03:28 PM)
QUOTE (Incesticide89 @ Jul 3 2008, 08:02 AM)
i really like it. the imagery that comes out is very powerful. nice raw emotions.

thanks

your welcome :lol:




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