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Title: Quit


D-7 - July 12, 2008 07:09 PM (GMT)
"Quit"
If one gets too much,
the mind doesn't know what to do.
Doesn't dare to touch,
afraid it would break too.

Words will be spoken,
and questions will be asked.
Noone still knows what's been taken,
or what has already been done.


Incesticide89 - July 12, 2008 07:18 PM (GMT)
nice. i like how its short but it gets the point accross. i really like it. very powerful.

D-7 - July 12, 2008 11:27 PM (GMT)
Thanks. It means a lot to me. :)

Incesticide89 - July 12, 2008 11:46 PM (GMT)
anytime

diana - July 28, 2008 08:14 AM (GMT)
that was really impressive, even though it was short, I liked it.

D-7 - July 28, 2008 09:13 AM (GMT)
Thankye, thankye. :)




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