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[Doumeki Shizuka]

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[Doumeki Shizuka]

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[Doumeki Shizuka]

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That last one has the potential to be really cute, but I hope that, since it doesn't seem to be quite done yet, that I can add a bit of suggestion to it?
I think that, for the way you draw, Kurogane's shoulders are too broad. CLAMP can pull it off, but they're pretty much the only people who can. (Trust me, I've tried, XD) The shoulders are making Kurogane look like a giant in comparison to Fay. He's also a smidge too tall, Kurogane's only about a head or so taller than Fay. In your picture if Kuro stood up straight, you'd have about a head and three-quarters worth of space between the two, (Which is also strange considering Fay is in front of Kuro and there should be slightly less than that...like, the top of Fay's head should be about level with the middle of Kuro's chin...) I'm not sure if any of that will have an effect on Fay, because right now he looks very small compared to Kurogane, but I think that Fay is fine here, and that it's Kurogane who is causing issues.
Also, I'm not quite sure what's going on with Fay's right, our left, arm. It's bent backwards and I tried putting my arm in that position to figure out what was going on, and it kind of hurt...^^;; I do like his outfit though. n_n And Kuro's expression is muy sexy.