Hyuia Mayten.

[Hyuia Mayten]

Name:
Hyuia Mayten

Age:
18

Rank:
Tokubetsu Jounin

Clan:
Mayten clan. Dead.

Kekkei Genkai:
Shadow Form. (Similar to a Jinchuriki, Hyuia can harness a chakra source that allows him to manipulate shadows. Rather powerful, but undiscovered and uncontrolable for now. Hyuia will be the first Mayten clan member to ever tap into the Kekkei Genkai.)

Village:
Konoha.

Chakra Nature:
Undiscovered.

Physical Description:
18 year old male with a firm build, old black coat that drags behind with rips and holes in it, displaying the Mayten crest on the back. A deffinative scar on the chin, approximatley 2 1/2 inches in length, running horizontily. Cargo style black pants, with many pouches, metal knee and thigh guards. Black vest.

Personality:
Not very talkative, Hyuia is offten looked at as the outcast, he finds it hard to talk to new people, and even when he does have conversations, they are usually poorly structured and almost scary.. He avoids anything and everything.. All he seems to want is to be alone and for people not to care about him.

History:
Born into a dying clan, a clan that has never really been known as a powerful or fearsome one. Hyuias' family died in combat when he was young, to young to remember why or how, and no one will tell him. He is the last of the Mayten clan, and he seems to think he doesn't do the name proud. He's not a heroic shinobi, Hyuia watched his team die on a mission, he tells people he simply watched, not scared, not injured, he just didn't help. He is confussed, he doesn't know why he is here, why he would be put here when the village would be better with out him.

Fighting Style:

Jutsu:

Bunshin no Jutsu {Clone Technique}
Henge no Jutsu {Transformation Technique}
Kawarimi no Jutsu {Substitution Technique}
Shunshin no Jutsu {Body Flicker Technique}
Suimen Hokou no Waza {Art of Surface Walking}

Kenkyio. A quick blast of chakra, close combat open palmed jab to the torso.

Paralysis. Surging chakra into the opponent leaving them unable to move for a short period of time.

Shadow Relocation. I fall down into my shadow then reapear in areas with minimal lighting, limited range. (No real benefit, just prevents him from jumping or anything like that, just to keep his compossure.)

Weapons:
Shuriken.
Old, worn out kammas, the only item left with historical purpose of the Mayten clan, they belonged to Hyuia's Father.

Family And/Or Friends:
He knows many people, but has no friends. People look at him funny, they don't like him, so he distances himself from them.

RP Sample:
I wake up late, as usual. As I head down town they all look at me, I can't fade into a crowd, I am a focal point no matter where i am, they are looking at me, always looking with hateful eyes. They hate me, but I can't help it, I'm not brave, they died because of me, but it isn't my fault, I hate them! ...I could kill them.. I should kill them... But I know I wont, I'm too weak, I don't deserve the clothes on my back, I am pathetic..

I position myself in an alley way, but they all still glare at me as they walk by, I can't hide, I see my new team, ready for our mission. I wont go, I'd only hold them back. They don't need me, They'd be better off without me.

*Small child throws a half eaten apple towards me.*
-I fade into the ground and relocate behind him-

Don't... Do that...

*The child runs away. Yelling, don't kill me you freak!*

Why am I a freak.. Why would he be scared of me..? I'm just a coward.. No one is scared of me, everyone hates me..

Stats:

Level:20
Experience: 0/200

Health: 185
Chakra: 185
Strength: 8
Endurance: 8
Dexterity: 20
Ninjutsu: 14
Genjutsu: 5
Mental Power: 5
Chakra Control: 50%



Missions:
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A-Ranked:
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This post has been edited by Hyuia Mayten on Sep 1 2008, 01:42 AM

[Geddy]

Remember that it's supposed to be in 3rd person limited, not first person. That means everything (personality, history, RP sample, and for some reason, weapons).

For the Kekkei Genkai, you have to have it there. Whether he can use it or not just yet is up to you.

When adding jutsu, remember to add the academy jutsu that he knows first, then use our format for the custom ones that you want. Take a look at some other profiles that have been accepted and you'll see what I mean.

[Hyuia Mayten]

Yeah I was having a look through some of them yesterday and got a bit confussed as to whether I did it right or not. Righto, well I'll edit it now and just let me know if I do anything else wrong.

Do I really need to change the RP sample? Role Playing is supposed to be me playing a role. Role Playing from 3rd person is narating. I noticed you joined on my birthday too btw.

This post has been edited by Hyuia Mayten on Sep 1 2008, 01:39 AM

[Geddy]

Haha, that's cool. But you really do need to make it a narration since that's the general form of RP that most people use. It makes it a bit less tricky to RP back to.

When you're doing your clan/jutsu, you need to get them approved in the forums below before you can stick them on your profile.

Finally, the personality/physical description/RP sample need to be longer and in more detail.