Title: Kakashi Hatake
MINIMATTY - April 28, 2010 08:27 AM (GMT)
I did a drawing and then light box my first drawing and then shaded that one in i realized the shading was not good but it was my first time ever to do shading. But please you guys tell me what you think. Thanks :)http://poke-artist.deviantart.com/art/Kaka...-Face-146878062http://poke-artist.deviantart.com/art/Kaka...haded-146878528
Sorry for the links i forgot my Photobucket password.
poonipoonz - May 5, 2010 02:41 AM (GMT)
Honestly it looks pretty spot on man. Definitely one of your best works. :D Keep up the great work too. :yush!:
TheBloodyValentine - May 5, 2010 03:05 AM (GMT)
Only gripe I have with this is his face. I don't mean it looks bad, it's actually very good, but.. it's just a bit too long. And something about his eyes just seems off.. but other than that, I really like it. :] Just those little things is all.
Jaffar - May 5, 2010 03:18 AM (GMT)
|QUOTE (TheBloodyValentine @ May 4 2010, 07:05 PM)|
| Only gripe I have with this is his face. I don't mean it looks bad, it's actually very good, but.. it's just a bit too long. And something about his eyes just seems off.. but other than that, I really like it. :] Just those little things is all. |
The main problem is that the nose is far, far too low. Its about where the mouth should be, and considering the eyes are already high on their own, the gap between the nose and eyes is humongous.
Other than that though, like the others said, it is good.
Howey - July 9, 2010 03:35 AM (GMT)
The tonel wrok of the shading is quite good but you have to keep the shading in one direction and also make sure that you blend the diffrent shades together, Otherwise really good work :yush!:
spitfire - July 10, 2010 06:41 AM (GMT)
Very good, just some minor problems.
The nose, like Jaffy said, should be higher, that's where the mouth is.
The shading on Kakashi's right ear. It seems a bit off somehow to me.
Just some stuff to note, but it's great! :amaze:
MINIMATTY - July 11, 2010 04:35 PM (GMT)
Thank you everyone for all your comments and advice i will take it all in and remember to use it in my next artwork. Thank you all :D