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 Selena (aka The dark crow)
Gekkouhime Moria
Posted: Dec 8 2008, 12:40 AM


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Okay another self made character from me. This time its a very mystic piece...First of all, her name

Name: Selena

Nickname: Dark Crow

Age: 32

Height: 5´11

Weight: 149 lbs

Appearance: She wears a dark red scarf that covers her mouth and shoulders, she has a long dark black Cape and Blue, middle long hairs. Black trousers and dark red boots complete this women. And she has a bow and arrows.

Species: Human

Piratecrew: Belongs to Gecko Morias old crew.


Life Story: Selena was born in the New World, on a tiny village called Mirror Town and lived together with her grandmother in a big house. Her parents she lost at the age of 5 through the hand of a pirate crew called the Slayers. They punched Selena half to death and cut the heads of her parents off...All this she saw with her own eyes. After this she went to her grandma and was there until her 20th Birthday. Selena bought herself a ship and begun to sail away to find the Pirate Crew who destroyed her life and that her parents. On this adventure she found the Crow Crow Fruit and eat it. Since then she is able to transform herself into a crow.(That why she is nicknamed as Dark Crow) Later then her ship was crushing against a stone cliff at night and Selena droves on the waves away...Some hours later she awoked and met her future Kapt´n, Gecko Moria. She tells him her past and Moria asked her to join his crew. Then she sails with him until Kaidou appeared. After the fight with Kaidou, Selena survived somehow and has now two goals to reach. First of all she had to found the pirate crew that destroyed her life and second to find her beloved Kapt´n Moria again.


Devilfruit: The Crow Crow Fruit

Kategory; Zoan Fruit

Appearance: like a Peach


Ability: Transforms the owner into a crow, is able to fly in the animal form and this fruit increase your speed enorm...

Were it found: at summer islands

Weakness: Besides that the user can´t swim, the user lost the ability to see colors, that means he see the whole world black and white...and is no longer able to show feelings expect hate.
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Monkey D. Luffy
Posted: Dec 8 2008, 01:12 AM


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I think the fact it has no weakness is sort of god moddy, youre telling me it's flawlessm also no strengths?

Aside from that devil fruit part it's a fine character.
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Gekkouhime Moria
  Posted: Dec 8 2008, 03:39 PM


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Okay, i rewrite the DF a bit. Is it now okay? I hope so,
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Koske
Posted: Dec 8 2008, 06:20 PM


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I'm no mod or anything, but I would advise against the 'can't show emotions barr hate' thing. Though it is true that Zoan fruits have been mentioned to change to personality of the user slightly, I think that's a bit much and will interfere with RPing. Though there's nothing technically wrong with it, I'd more say that she tends to develope hatred towards other more easily, as for the color-blindness, that's good trade off for flight, though as a Crow, I'd say that the half-animal form should be physically weaker than the human form, but for the ability to fly, worth using. But these are just suggestions, unless Sak says otherwise this looks acceptable to me.
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Monkey D. Luffy
Posted: Dec 8 2008, 08:21 PM


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Good points Koske, sorry to bother you Gekkou, but just follow those instructions. I WAS wondering why you didn't give any explanation to any other forms, zoan types do usually have human, animal and hybrid. Also I agree with the only hatred thing and it could be more like you become more solitaire or competitive because that's pretty much what crows are like.
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