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Charlz	Posted: Aug 6 2007, 02:06 PM
Advanced Member Group: Admin Posts: 83 Member No.: 4 Joined: 3-August 07	First song that I've written in a few months. Creative-ness really hasn't been good to me. Do you believe in fate? Do you believe in redemption of all your mistakes? Can you fix them? Do you believe in love at first sight? Or does it take a while? Is everybody different, or are emotions all the same? My future life has yet to start And the past grips on, like I'm its beating heart Or is it mine? Do I depend on the past to keep myself alive? Do you believe that absence Makes the heart grow fonder? Or does it just pull people apart? Do you believe that you have total control? Or is disaster inevitable No matter where you start? Your future life has yet to start And your past grips on, like you're its beating heart Or is it yours? Does you need the past to keep moving on? Is life a series of disappointments Broken down by small amounts of smiles? Is life, really defined by choices Or would you have ended up here Ended up here Whether you went left, or right? Our future lives, have yet to start But the past is gripping on, like we're its beating hearts Do we need it? Or do we shrug it away...away? Our future lives; future lives, have yet to start But the past is holding on, holding onto our hearts Holding on To our beating hearts...

aly	Posted: Aug 6 2007, 02:11 PM
Administrator Group: Admin Posts: 151 Member No.: 1 Joined: 30-July 07	omg! that is amazing! Seriously, you are SUCH a great writer!

Charlz	Posted: Aug 6 2007, 02:22 PM
Advanced Member Group: Admin Posts: 83 Member No.: 4 Joined: 3-August 07	Lol, thanks Al. I was sat trying to come up with something, and decided just to write and see where it got me. A few edits later, and I had that.

bee	Posted: Aug 6 2007, 02:48 PM
Advanced Member Group: Admin Posts: 152 Member No.: 2 Joined: 30-July 07	That is AMAZING. you are an awesome writer! i write like... crap.. i'm jealous. great work <3

Posted: Aug 6 2007, 03:32 PM

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QUOTE (bee @ Aug 6 2007, 08:48 PM)

That is AMAZING. you are an awesome writer! i write like... crap..

i'm jealous. great work <3

Aww, thank you. But I refuse to believe that you write like crap. I just won't believe it.

missxxsierra	Posted: Sep 1 2007, 10:06 PM
Newbie Group: Members Posts: 15 Member No.: 12 Joined: 1-September 07	WOW! You are super good! I wish I could do that! =]

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