Ooooo i worked really hard on this but oim making more because i want to become an aassiant spriter! please tell me what you think!

Not bad Firefly. You skills have defintly improved alot. I personally like the battle. There are a few things to clean up still. Keep trying ok. You are almost at the level we need as a spriter. Much more fulid then the one before, you can barely tell its an edit. Just learn to fix a few things and dont get discouraged. You defintly have to stuff to be a spriter, but not just yet.

Okay first I think you are getting better, you are working hard at this I can tell but you still have a long ways to go.

The sprite however is wrong in a few areas. Most obvious is she has a skirt instead of shorts, her boots are two short and she lacks the crisscrossed things over her belly.

Rather then make the black areas all black try making them dark grays. You also need to work on shading (espicially in the black areas).

If you keep working at it and improving your sprites every time then you will make assistant spriter.

I REALLY do need to work on shading and i tried those yellow things on her belly but it looked horiible because she didnt have enough room.I didnt know how to exactly make the shorts XD im not that experinced(sure u can tell) But ill take this advice and use in my next peice wch will be a Ves Ves one si=ummoning her whip frm a Venus sprite but ill work more and more!

That sprite looks good for a beginner.I can't edit sprites.

<Luna> I think great ,All it need is a little work.

ok thanks