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 Gohan, I am Sasashi Uchiha from Naruto legends.
Gohan
Posted: Dec 23 2007, 02:07 AM


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Name: Gohan
Age: 7
Race: Half Saiyan
Height: 4'0
Weight: 62lbs
Alignment: Good

RP Sample: It was night again, and it was young. The cold wind haunted the dark, like a ninja stalking its prey. This is why doors are locked. This is why people fear the dark, the cold, the feeling of helplessness. Sasasih did not tremble at these words, he merely found them intriguing, satisfying in a way. As he closed the scroll the wind started to howl outside, shaking the windows, the glass clacking against there frames.
Sasashi, knowing what lurked on the streets at night, packed his gear. He gathered it with nimble care, making only the slightest sounds, much like the wind on a summer night. With his leather pouch he carried his shurikens, his many experimental traps, and a small pouch of food for later. On his back he carried his deadly bow, but no arrows, for few knew its secret, its purpose on this earth... not even Sasashi knew why he could wield it.
His movements was silent, he placed his pouch around his waist, the contents moving slightly. As He opened the window the cold breeze made his hair stand on end. Sasashi shuddered, not in fear, but in excitement. As he leaped from his bedroom, the night, the darkness waited for him, the silent killer, and the ninja.
Landing nearby, he checked his surroundings, the light projecting his shadow. Exposed, he pounced for the cover of the forest, the trees looming over him. "GET BACK HERE YOU THIFE!!!". Sasashi looked to his right, still calm, still aware, he had done nothing wrong as of yet. "YOU GET BACK HERE OR I'LL KILL YOU!!!". It was Mrs. Hetpi, her shrill voice piercing the quiet chirping of the crickets. "SOMBODY STOP HER!!!". Her? Sasashi half expected that old loon Mr. Hetpi. He was always stealing money from there savings jar, everybody knew it, but nobody paid it any mind.
Sasashi looked intently. The girl, in the shadows, clutched a money sack, but her face was yet to be seen from the dark. "GIVE THAT BACK NOW!!!" said Mrs. Hetpi, her voice now full of rage. The girl turned around to face her, her hand reaching into her pocket. Sasashi knew what she was planning, he closed his eyes, focusing on the young woman’s movements.
The mysterious girl pulled out a small ball, and threw it to the ground. A small explosion revealed, a thick layer of smoke, now blacking out the whole area. The girl in the haze jumped for cover, her dress flapping in the wind. Sasashi could see her, even though his eyes were closed, he saw her run into the alley, and jump over the fence. He pounced, his movement much more silent than the girls. As he passed through the smoke, he could hear the muttered cries of Mrs. Hetpi "Stop...don’t you...DARE!!!".
As he landed over the fence, he could see the footprints of the woman, her shoes leading to the forest. "I could lose her in there" Sasashi thought, his feet shifting, his heart racing. Again he made a jump for the forest, picking up the trail as he peered through the night.
"I got it, finally some food!". Sasashi stopped, realizing he had found her, landing above her in a nearby tree. "I can finally eat something!" She gloated to nobody. "You should not take what is not yours." Sasashi said, his voice echoing off the trees. "W...who’s there?" the girl’s voice now becoming less calm. "It does not matter, give to me what you have taken, or fight for it!"
"I’m no weakling! I can fight to!"

"Then let us introduce ourselves. I am Sasashi Uchiha"

"My name is Elle Shie, and I do not wish to fight you Sasashi Uchiha."

"You challenged me when you stole what was not yours."

"I see...so your not going to back down are you?"

"I can see no other way..."

"I admire your honor Sasashi... Its very cute."

Sasashi was not ready for that, his heart raced at her comment, never being called cute before.

"So lets fight, im ready when you are Sasashi"

"Alright then Elle, are you prepared to face the night?"

"Are you?"

A shurikens flashed through the night, its deadly tip hitting a nearby tree.

"Your going to have to do better than that Sasashi!" said Elle.

Sasashi threw another, missing her again. Elle smiled, seeing her "challenge" as an easy defeat. As Sasashi threw shurikens after shurikens, Elle's fear had subsided.
Sasashi had circled Elle a few times now, he could see her smile through the darkness.

"Is that all you got Sasashi?"
"No, so maybe I'll fight you...hand to hand!"

Elle, in a sudden panic, looked around as to where Sasashi was, she saw him, his light clothing giving him away, and she put up her guard up, and gave her right hand a thrust at Sasashi. He blocked, pushing her to the left, into the light.
He could now fully see her figure, a young girl, with a cute face just like his, long brown hair, and a beautiful red dress that fell down to her knees. "She's... pretty..." Sasashi thought.

"And what are you staring at?"

Sasashi now put down his guard, smiling.

"Hit me if you can." he said

She lunged, her figure again shrouded in the night. Elle then punched again, and could feel it being blocked. She punched she came back, now giving a high kick, and felt Sasashi give way. Sasashi felt it to. He leaped backward, Elle in hot pursuit. Pulled off his bow, and brought back the string. He stopped and pulled up the bow in a firing stance.

"You moron, you’ve got no arrows!!!"

She snickered, Sasashi even pulling back the string.

"Wrong again Elle."

Elle gasped, her face turning fearful. A bright blue light shined, blinding her. It was coming from the bow, she could see in now, a lighting shaped rod connected to his hand and running past the string. An arrow!
Sasashi let it loose, the arrow running past her head, she stopped as it flew by, paralized by fear, but recovering a moment later.

"To bad your aim sucks Sasashi."

"Again Elle... wrong."

The arrow had landed a few feet away, its light still shining revealing the wires around her. As Elle's eyes widened, the wire cut loose and the trap began to come to life.

"What the?!?!" shrieked Elle, her legs now caught in the trap.

Elle was almost instantly suspended above the ground, her hair blowing in the breeze.

"OH MY GOD LET ME DOWN!!!" she yelled, her please going un answered.

Sasashi walked over to her, there eyes meeting, she blushed.

"You wanna give me that money now?" said Sasashi.

"Money? What money?"

"Then what did you steal Elle?"

"This..."

She reached into her pocket, showing the bag that she had stolen. Sasashi took it from her gently, there hands touched, Sasashi now blushing. He opened the bag and found not money, but a small scroll, he dropped the bag opening the scroll, and in small print it read.

"One egg, two spoonfuls of sugar, a cup of milk..."

Sasashi looked at it puzzled.

"A recipe?"

"YES A RECIPE!!!, WHAT KIND OF GIRL DO YOU THINK I AM?!?!"

"You stole Mrs. Hetpi's sweet roll recipe?"

"YES!!!"

Sasashi rolled his eyes, knowing that his battle was over a recipe.

"So are you gonna let me down or what?"

"Oh yeah, sure."

He pulled a cord above his head, releasing the wires, and setting Elle free. She started to fall, and landed in Sasashi's arms, his face had a warm smile on it. Elle blushed again, her hands around Sasashi's neck.

"Umm...so are you ok...Elle?"

"I think I'd be better if you put me down" A frown now on her face.

As Sasashi let her down, she gave a little smile.

"Your pretty good Sasashi... I look forward to out next meeting, hopefully it will be a little more friendly"

"Same to you Elle. I’ve had a wonderful night."

"You say that like we’ve been on a date." She giggled.

"Well...I...uh"

"Your cute Sasashi, I'll see yah around"

And with a leap she was off, her hair blowing in the wind. Sasashi looked at the scroll in his hand, he sighed, the night a little less exiting than it could have been.

"Not a bad night, I'll try even harder next time."

(Sorry if that was long, I wanted to show you how good of an rper I am>)

Stats:
HP: 10,000
PL: 13,000
St.P: 5,000( split points amongst the three)
Ki: 1,000
Str: 2,000
Spd: 2,000
Zeni: 15,000z

Moves
Masenko, After Image, Energy Blast, and Speed Ball.
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Trunks
Posted: Dec 23 2007, 06:57 AM


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You forgot to split your points amongs your ki, str.,and speed other than that if fine I thought your rp was good and yeah it was a little long but I'm use to it so fix your numbers and then its accepted
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Gohan
Posted: Dec 23 2007, 07:30 PM


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Edited and thanks for the comment about the rp.
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Trunks
Posted: Dec 23 2007, 07:50 PM


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ok accepted
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