Requests For Feedback..., if your story needs PEER feedback

Some of you have mentioned that you are having trouble finding stories to feedback. And some of you have asked for a place where you can ask for feedback on your stories.

So here you go....

Post a link to YOUR story if you haven't received PEER feedback on your piece/post after it's been up at least ONE week.

Once you RECEIVE feedback, please edit your post to reflect that you got feedback. That will give those who are looking for new stories a break.

If you are receiving feedback already, this is not the place to post. This is for those who aren't getting feedback yet. Please don't abuse it--I know we all love feedback and want more, but let's give everyone a chance :) If you have received feedback on former post, but nothing on NEW post, link directly to those posts please!

I'll start a new thread every so often to help out.

Longing to Follow Those Who Wait on the Other Side of Heaven (Starting from post 2)

My story already has a feedback thread.

EDIT: I have gotten feedback! :)) Thank you!

This post has been edited by Silvereagle on Mar 14 2009, 10:49 PM

It came upon a Dream (This is section five)

I already have a feedback thread, I would just like some more feedback starting on my fifth post. Thanks! =]

[EDIT] I have received feedback for this. :)

Cornelia Story (Post 3)

Feedback for Part 3 please! :) My story already has a FB thread too. ^^

EDIT: I have gotten feedback for this. :D

Weaving Arrows post 1

I already have a feedback thread, but I'm looking for some more FB :) (never can have too much :P)

Rasi--this story already has feedback, so you need to link to the firs post that doesn't have any feedback. If all post have been feedbacked, then the story doesn't belong in this thread :) This is just for stories/post that haven't received feedback. Thanks! ~Nia

Jack's Tale

I'd really like to get some feedback on this. Especially part one.

EDIT: I got feedback! Thank you!

This post has been edited by Daeriel on Mar 31 2009, 06:59 PM

If you can be a hero...

Currently no feedback post.

EDIT: Ihave recived feedback

This post has been edited by Yellow Leader on Apr 5 2009, 09:07 PM

So, by the kindess of Nia's heart, she is blackmailing me to post a link for Wolfsong and my battle in the Tournament of Champions, Round 2. Round 1 is also open, but it is a little older. But yeah. Definately read it at the site of the link we give, that way you'll see what is going on (as there is another writer writing with us. Anyway, have fun, and let's keep Nia happy, right? Enjoy! For tragedy and sorrow await!

My story has a feedback thread, but I would like some feedback for posts 3 and 4 (they're posted in seperate links below) Thank you! :)

Only Chance: Post 3

Only Chance: Post 4

EDIT: I have recieved feedback for both posts. :D

This post has been edited by Dolphin on Apr 5 2009, 05:58 PM

Estell Post #2

Okay.. this post says it was posted Feb 4, 2008. But that is not technically true since what is currently there was not written until November, 2008. The last three posts in the thread were added March 25. The three are 1 segment but since I didn't want to post parts to big, I divided it into three. In my FB thread, I already say what I'm looking for, but the gist of it is I'm looking for logic issues and big things that throw a reader from the story. I hope you enjoy!! :)

E. I have fb! :)

The Gift feedback

This was a short story I did. I have a feedback thread but no feedback yet.


Edit: I got feedback. :D Thanks Daeriel!

This is post #4 in my Untitled NaNo

[EDIT] I have received feedback for this. :)

Jack's Tale scene two

Jack's Tale scene three

I have a feedback thread and I received feedback for post one, but not yet for scenes two and three.

EDIT: I have received feedback for scene two! Thank you, Joy!

EDIT 2: I've received feedback for scene three, thanks, Liss!

Darkness Rising... multiple chapters.

So I haven't got feedback for ANY of it... and it's been up for over a year now. :ninja: Pretty please! Even if it's only for the first scene...

EDIT: THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU FOR THE FEEEEDBBBBAAAACK!!!!! =D

My Heart, My Home

It's undefined fiction and it hasn't yet received any feedback. It's been up since the 11th of Avril! :)

I don't have a FB thread yet... :P

E.
I have received FB! Merci beaucoup!