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Warrior Maiden
Posted: Oct 18 2009, 05:26 PM


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I'd like feedback for these two poems.

Night

Sand
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EclecticElegance
Posted: Oct 30 2009, 08:17 PM


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Pretty, pretty please could I have some feedback on these two poems?

Yesterday - and Tomorrow

Spring

Edit on 11-18-2009: I have received feedback for Yesterday and Tomorrow, but not for the other poem yet.
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CherishedOne
Posted: Nov 9 2009, 03:05 PM


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The Golden Gazebo

Part 7 please?

I have received feedback. Thanks! All I need is Part 8 feedbacked and then the thread will be caught up. :))

EDIT: Part 8 has received feedback. :D
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Shadow
Posted: Nov 26 2009, 05:45 PM


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Could I please have feedback for these two poems? They've been up there for a while, unread. XD

Goodbye

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Blue Monkey
Posted: Dec 6 2009, 05:45 PM


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I don't really get all that much feedback so... please edit this! My history teacher said it was good... :D
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