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 Ryushi Calica, my turn
Broken sky
Posted: Nov 22 2007, 12:43 AM


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Name: Ryushi Calica
Age: 14
Gender: male
Race: werewolf
Special Ability:
His healing process widely known as a "healing factor" that regenerates damaged or destroyed areas of his body far beyond the capabilities of an ordinary human and render. He also possesses superhumanly acute senses of sight, smell, and hearing.
At dusk he changes into a werewolf, and at dawn he changes into a human. During the full moon he changes into a werewolf too, but for each post the moon is shining upon him he stays in werewolf form even during the day for twice that time.
Faction: mar

Wins: 0
Ties: 0
Losses: 0

Personality: Ryushi is a very active person. He plays tennis, soccer, and baseball. He also boxes, but now he just fights will animals in the forest. He is cruel sometimes but then he becomes soft. When Ryushi see someone hurting his friends or family, he will get hyper and use his dad arm. He doesn’t like to play that much with his friends ether.

Physical Description:
Human form
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True Form
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History:
Four years ago, when Ryushi was just 10 years old, Ryushi mom and dad were training Ryushi to fight with arms. They were teaching Ryushi how to use arms and all the types of arms. Ryushi mom only have nature arms and dimension arms. Ryushi father has weapon arms and ghost arms. Everyday Ryushi mom dad and Ryushi go into the black heart forest and then we sneak into the black heart cave to battle some monsters. Ryushi asked his mom if he can have some arms to fight but then Ryushi mom gives me a nature arm to battle. That arm is just to trap the opponent for a short period of time. Ryushi want to use his dads arms but he gives Ryushi an arm that he had when he was just a small kid. That arm let's you switch places with your opponent.
That night it was a full moon, Ryushi stolen one of my dad weapon arm and his mothers dimension arm to protect myself. He went back out to the black heart forest. He didn't know why they the black heart forest. Ryushi dad told him how to hear if someone coming. Ryushi touch the floor with his hands. He felt like an animal was coming but an animal with three legs. Ryushi ran back home, but then he just froze. He fell down on his knees. He felt the vibration throw his legs. He turns back, but it was his mother using her ghost arm to catch me. " Ryushi I thought you was at the house training. Said Ryushi mom. " I can't use your arms, it's to old." Said Ryushi. Ryushi used his dad arm to put Ryushi mom to sleep. Ryushi ran back to the house. On his way he was a hurt werewolf. When Ryushi check the werewolf pulse, the werewolf got up then the werewolf bit Ryushi in the neck. The next thing he knows, he was at home. Ryushi was confused because he was in the forest known he’s at home. Ryushi mom and father weren’t mad at me first then Ryushi’s mom said “ go up to your room now!” Ryushi went strait up stairs to my room then I went to a deep sleep. The next morning Ryushi ran down stairs to look for his mother and father. He spends the whole morning and afternoon looking for them. He couldn’t found them so he went to the forest. It was weird how it was a full moon but a full moon only comes a month. Soon Ryushi felt like if he was growing fur. Ryushi couldn’t control himself. He turned to a werewolf.
Level: 1
EXP: 0/100
Stats: 100
Strength: 20
Speed: 20
Magic: 15
Defense: 20
Synchronization: 15
Luck: 10
Pewter:

Human Form Arm’s
Name: Chained Moon Axe
Type: Weapon
Class: C
Accessory: armor gloves
Normal Form: A long axle, used for short and medium range attacks.
Version 1: The axle can now change length and size but the weight stays the same.
Version 2: A spear headed chain, Used for all types of ranged attacks. Can be control by the user mind if he focus hard enough.

Name: Claw Knuckles
Type: Ghost
Class: D
Accessory: A bracelet worn on the left hand
Normal Form: The user grows claws that curl over the fist. Enabling claw knuckles for short range attacks.

Name: Moon Blast
Type: Nature
Class: D
Accessory: A bracelet worn on the right hand
Normal Form: Allows the user dark and shadow blasts. Charged for greater power.

Name: Roar
Type: Dimension
Class: D
Accessory: one big pierced earring.
Normal Form: The user can emit sonic howl blast. It can be used to deflect attacks or attack. User can change it for greater power.
Joe
Posted: Nov 22 2007, 11:02 PM


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In my oppinion, the history is not finished and you might want to put it into Microsoft Word cause theres not very good grammar in that.

I'm not sure if you can have three ARM for the wolf form and another 3 ARM for the human form.

Personality has'nt been filled.
Zecarius
Posted: Nov 23 2007, 12:03 AM


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To answer Joe's question, no, you can not have multiple ARM for each form. Sorry, but you just get one set to be used in both forms.
Joe
Posted: Dec 5 2007, 10:59 PM


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The grammar in that history is still pretty bad considering that the characters name is just his name and never has an S on the end. For example:

Yours= Ryushi mum had ARM
what it should be= Ryushi's mum had ARM.
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And you need to put a personality into it.
Joe
Posted: Dec 6 2007, 12:13 AM


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theres no basket ball or video games or anything like that in MAR so personality makes no sense. However I'll approve it and move it but you still need to edit that part somehow.
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